SB2 - First Crit

Although I was meant to just observe the presentations done by the class, I thought I would quickly put together a presentation just to address my idea, and the direction I want to take for this project.:

Feedback:

- I really like the way you have looked at the laws that have been put in place instead of guns, I feel like this idea could be further developed and maybe you could make a zine that showed all the crazy laws that are in place in America. 

- I like the way you have fully immersed yourself in the research and impact of gun laws, that site with the updated gun crimes is really shocking and a great find for research

- Even though you have put together good research, what is the main purpose of this? Are you bringing attention to the situation? Because the situations 

> What I gathered from this crit, is that my chosen ideology, although was well researched and offered and interesting direction, it lacked the power to create an impact. This project would be basically bringing awareness to a situation that is already heavily documented and known. So I have decided to change my project, and focus on an outcome which I would relate to more.