- The designs are really eye catching - the use of orange
- Like the comical presence of the spot on the chin - slightly annoying, works well with the story
- The style is acceptable all ages and follows the brief
- Looks like Harry Potter
- To similar to Harry Potter
- Could you experiment with the use of bubble wrap and the connotation of popping a spot?
- To resemble less of Harry potter, see if you can enlarge the vector of Adrian to have the main focus on the spot.
To further develop my idea following the crit, I looked at the bubble wrap idea to see how it would look:
Overall I wasn't sure this would be a good idea for a book design, especially for the target audience of the book. Although comical for those of an older age, this design could be viewed as something distasteful to the younger demographic, which would fail one of the criteria for the brief.
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