Interim Crit Feedback and Respon.

For the final crit, I wanted to identify what my peers thought about my work, and what colour would be most successful as the final outcome, they were also told to identify whether they thought the final outcome was completed or not.

Here are the notes and feedbacks given:

• orange- works best and allows each colour to stand out. This makes it more celebratory. the paper choice means that the perforated edges work better and stop the whole poster from tearing. Looks finished.
  
• I love the use of the colourful paper, they add another layer to the work. The interactive element also works really well, maybe give an example of the mask taken out.
  
• The vibrant yellow works really well in contrast to the black and pink. the composition works well and ideal information included.
  
• Very celebratory in style, shown through colour scheme and the idea of involvement. Very clearly shows what the print is representing. I like the two brighter papers as they make the pink more vibrant, and fitting to the celebratory tone intended.
  
• I like the yellow one, the pick and yellow gave the strongest contrate compared to others.
  
• Really cool interactive design. I like the bright paper you have used.
  
• The pink against the yellow background creates a vibrant aesthetic - eye catching and presents mode of a celebratory outcome. The design is busy ad the text surrounding this is successful - still informative but not drawing attention away (from the design).